Today I am going to start forming a response to Premier Gordon Campbell’s letter with some questions and suggestions about BC’s energy plan. I think one of the suggestions will be to make a version that is easily comprehensible for kids and not loaded with what I refer to as ‘the hypnotism factor’ which is a way of writing that makes people inclined to believe you. Things that contribute to the hypnotism factor include suspense like short sentences, long titles, repetition, and big, fancy, complicated words.

-Mina